Friday, June 21, 2024

BOOK REVIEW: Monster Hunter International

This book is a rip-roaring action slug-fest that doesn't pull punches, that drives the characters through hell and back.

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*4.5 STARS*
Military Fantasy 

If you've been in the workforce long enough, you will probably eventually end up with a boss that rages like a beast, but few end up with one that is an actual beast. In this case: a Werewolf. But CPA Owen Zastava Pitt does, and after he has a gruesome, no-holds barred fight to the death, he tosses his boss out the fourteenth-story office window. It's presumed that Owen's next performance review won't go over so well. While Owen nearly dies from his wounds, it turns out there is a whole lot more in store for this paper pushing accountant who is just trying to be normal.

But normal isn't good for survival. And when the fate of the world is at stake, it's a good thing that "Z" (as his friends call him) decides to join Monster Hunter International. An elite organization of monster hunters. Because, as it turns out, pretty much all of the myths and legends we've ever heard of—whether it be werewolves, vampires, or orcs and elves—end up as true. 

But they also end up as nothing in comparison to what is about to happen. 

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Monster Hunter International (book one of the series) is inventive, fun, clever. This is a great piece of modern-day military fantasy playing with age-old monster tropes. Highly recommended. Be warned that it is not for the faint of heart: there is plenty of blood and guts flying about, and a little bit of profanity. But hey, what do you expect when you are confronted by legions of the undead, giant flying stone gargoyles, and Master Vampires that can move faster than you can shoot?

The action sequences are intense, inventive, and there are a LOT of them, but in a good way.

The interactions with the Federal Agents from the Monster Control Bureau serve as an interesting plot device as the characters have to deal with government intrusion into their business. So, not only does MHI have to effectively save the world, they have to do it with the government breathing down their necks and getting in the way. Makes the story a little bit extra-relevant for anyone that has paid attention to the government overreach of recent years.

While Z is a crack shot, a bruiser, and a big guy that might normally be pegged as the brute of the bunch, he is analytical, and ends up with some interesting psychic powers. There is astral-projection, reliving an evil maniac's age-old memories, and a peculiar Old Man that seems to live in Owen's sub-conscious, and yet is able to effect things (at times) in the real world to interesting results.

One of the only complaints I have about the book is with the romantic subplot. Z has a big crush on someone, and while his interest is well telegraphed, the return interest is not...at first. The lady in question is expressly not interested and has a boyfriend she is apparently committed to. Though he is a pretentious Hollywood-style douche bag. So you know she'll come around eventually to Z's interests. The problem is that when she does the timing comes across as inappropriate. Yes, they all just died, and then undied—No. No. I'm not ruining that one, you'll have to read it for yourself—and the world is possibly about to come to an end if they can't prevail against an unstoppable evil force, so the prospect of death and never being able to utter her true feelings to Z are of course a decent motivation for the ill-timing, but it could have been done a little better. Small complaint. No big deal.

TRIGGER WARNING: As in there are a lot of triggers...and bullets, and guns. Oh yes, all kinds of guns. In such detail and breadth that if you aren't a gun nut, you won't know what four-fifths of these things are. But you probably stop looking them up by the third gun mentioned, because the story pulls you forward, and you just trust in the author's ability to paint a picture for you. But then, if all of these triggers bothers you, I'm not sure how else you'd think to fight off legions of the undead, giant stone gargoyles that can play can-opener with armored vans, and worse! Perhaps call 9-1-1, hope your local police department wasn't defunded, and responds faster than it takes for some unsavory character to commit untold atrocities upon you?

Yeah, that doesn't sound like a good idea.

No, you do what a red-blooded American does. You unleash hell and fight.

Hoo-ah!

*Ahem* Where was I? Oh, yes. That's exactly what Z does.

So, if you want big conflict, lots of action, lots of guns, the Supernatural, and end of the world scenarios, Monster Hunter International is a fun read.

4.5 out of 5 silver-tipped bullets for this one.

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Monday, April 22, 2024

The Long Awaited Release of Kip's Return (Kip the Quick, Book II)

Exciting news. Kip has returned. The book is finally out! I've been itching to share this with you for far too long. Click here to get it now! 

*EARLY READERS SAY: 

“…I really dragged out the Epilogues because I didn't want to be done. I really enjoyed the book, and I like how the Epilogues keep me looking forward to Book 3” 

"Loving the 'trouble' Kip is getting into. ”

 

I started writing Kip's adventures in Texas, when we lived there for a year. Life was full of upheaval after moving cross-country from California with two young children and no one in the area to help. My wife took on extra tasks like a trooper, never complaining, even when my work hours included night shifts in downtown Dallas. Finding time to write amidst the move, new jobs, and an entirely new area was quite the challenge. But one story idea that came to mind and stuck was a witty rascal of a thief in a dry hot land ravaged regularly by terrible storms. He wanted out of this hell hole, and he was willing to lie, cheat, and steal to do so. Thinking about others wasn't high on his list, but when the heist of a lifetime landed in his lap with an opportunity to flee this bastion of suffering, his friends helped him out—putting themselves in deep peril in the process. To keep them safe, Kip found himself challenged with the making the ultimate choice.

Now the sequel is out, and ready for you. It's over three times as long as the first, with more characters, more mystery, and more fun action to dig your teeth into.

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Back Cover Copy:

Kip is a Wanted Man. By the law and by a psychopath. What’s a good thief to do? 

Returning to Tander after a year away, Kip seeks to escape and lay low. When he finds the dark consequences of his past actions, he falls into a deadly game of cat and mouse with a mercenary seeking to satisfy a blood debt. Perhaps it would be better to just keep on running, but Kip can’t leave his friends behind. Not this time. 

He must use all of his skill, his charm, and his wit to uncover a plot that will bring disaster to Tander, right past wrongs, and maybe find himself another spot of the Essence—the stuff of magic and legend. 

 Kip’s Return is a fantasy adventure full of excitement, humor, and friendship.
 

 

Saturday, April 20, 2024

Kip's Return (Kip the Quick, Book II)

A witty fantasy adventure that will blow you away.

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KIP'S RETURN (Kip the Quick, Book II)
-FANTASY HEIST ADVENTURE-

Kip is a Wanted Man. By the law and by a psychopath. What’s a good thief to do? 

Returning to Tander after a year away, Kip seeks to escape and lay low. When he finds the dark consequences of his past actions, he falls into a deadly game of cat and mouse with a mercenary seeking to satisfy a blood debt. Perhaps it would be better to just keep on running, but Kip can’t leave his friends behind. Not this time. 

He must use all of his skill, his charm, and his wit to uncover a plot that will bring disaster to Tander, right past wrongs, and maybe find himself another spot of the Essence—the stuff of magic and legend. 

 Kip’s Return is a fantasy adventure full of excitement, humor, and friendship.
  
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Wednesday, April 17, 2024

New Fantasy Adventure - Kip's Return. Book Cover Reveal!

My novel, Kip's Return, is nearly ready to release. Should be any day now, and no later than the end of the month. Stay tuned for the date and subscribe to my newsletter to find out when it goes on sale for my awesome readers.

And here is the book cover reveal... Poor Kip, he looks a little flummoxed.


Kip's Return (Kip the Quick, Book II) book cover


Kip is a Wanted Man. By the law and by a psychopath. What’s a good thief to do?

Returning to Tander after a year away, Kip seeks to escape and lay low. When he finds the dark consequences of his past actions, he falls into a deadly game of cat and mouse with a mercenary seeking to satisfy a blood debt. Perhaps it would be better to just keep on running, but Kip can’t leave his friends behind. Not this time.

He must use all of his skill, his charm, and his wit to uncover a plot that will bring disaster to Tander, right past wrongs, and maybe find himself another spot of the Essence—the stuff of magic and legend.

Kip’s Return
is a fantasy adventure full of excitement, humor, and friendship.

 

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Monday, April 15, 2024

A Drink in Toulon - A Kip the Quick Short Story Adventure


Kip the Quick is a thief and a rogue, but he wants to go legit. Really, he does. So, when he meets with a nobleman to talk trade, all is fine and dandy until someone comes knocking. Loudly. And violently. Where’s a good spot of the Essence, when you really need some?

 

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Click here to start reading on my Substack site. No logon needed. This is where I've decided to house my short fiction for the foreseeable future. A Drink in Toulon is 7 parts, and now complete! I'd encourage you to subscribe to my Substack as well to get future stories right away.

A Drink in Toulon takes place a few months after the events of Kip the Quick. And if you read the first book, then you might just imagine what could happen in this short story. It's fun, exciting, and waiting to steal your breath away.

If you haven't read the first book, you can find it here, and watch for the amazing sequel coming soon!

Happy reading!

Friday, March 8, 2024

A New Short Story of Dark Fantasy

I'm getting ready to post a short story to SubStack. And when I say short story, I mean a LONG short story. About 10k words. I've been sitting on this story for years. If I had the time and interest I could keep sending out queries, but I'd rather just get it in front of readers. And I like the option to monetize Substack in the future and put it behind a Paywall instead of eternally for free on my blog.

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Travel a new path with me soon.

Check out https://cliftonH.Substack.com to find the story soon - Child of Iron. And read it while it is still free. It is dark fantasy, a little bit of grim dark with a splash of the epic fantasy. The question of the story is what happens when a young boy is pushed to his utter limit. How will he respond when a newfound power manifests within? Will he rise to the occasion? Stand strong against evil? Or will he succumb to the dark fascination of power?

All of this is leading up to posting a Kip the Quick short story that takes place between book 1 and the upcoming sequel, Kip's Return. And yes, I've been quiet on the blog for a very long time. Well, it's because I've been hard at work. And the fruit of that work will finally be revealed.

I'd be lying if I wasn't nervous to share. It's an old story. I wrote it back in 2010. If you've been a long time follower, you may have even read the first part ages back. Well, the full short story will finally be revealed. Stay tuned...

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Wednesday, June 16, 2021

Plotting Purgatory. I'm Stuck - Just Write - 012 Brainstorm Podcast

In episode 12, I analyze why I got stuck writing my newest project (codename: Dragons, for now...) I violated some of my inner understanding of my own writing process, and though I've stubbornly tried to push through anyway, I'm finally taking a step back to reevaluate. Little surprise, I'm spending too much time trying to Outline/Plot the project, when I don't even sufficiently "know" my characters yet.

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So, I'll analyze what works for me and what doesn't and hopefully this will help you in your own writing pursuits.

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Monday, June 7, 2021

Gripey Rant. I'm a Picky Reader - 011 Brainstorm Podcast

In episode 11, it's time for a good ole-fashioned rant about being a picky reader, and why I stop reading a lot of books. 

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I get stuck on this need for the right balance of character and plot. We always need strong characters. That's largely how we connect with a book through our shared human experience. It's also why series do so well, when they follow some of the same characters around that we have gotten to know so well. But for me, I don't want my story to become subsumed by this wandering experience in the life of a character with little appearance of plot giving structure. I certainly don't want the character to change who they are because of plot restrictions, create awkward illogical rationale for why someone is doing something...just because the plot dictates. And a major fantasy novel by an indie writer did just that for me. Let's examine.

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Monday, May 24, 2021

Infinity War Review, Comic Nerd & Kip 2 Progress - 010 Brainstorm Podcast

In episode 10, we discuss my thoughts on Marvel's Infinity War, and why it had a major story flaw. I was invested as a kid in the Marvel universe, by collecting multiple comic book series that still sit in boxes stored away growing dust to this day. I also lament the slow progression of Kip the Quick book 2.

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Monday, May 17, 2021

Fantasy Novel Reading: Kip the Quick - 009 Brainstorm Podcast

 In Episode 9, I read a chapter of my fantasy adventure novel, Kip the Quick, as Kip does research and sets out to pull together his team for the heist that started it all. And I tell of how the idea for Kip the Quick came in Texas: the crazy storms there inspiring me to a fantasy world where the orphan and rascal, Kip, was a witty thief that talked nearly as fast as he stole.

 Book 2 is coming soon, and the books are part of a planned trilogy.



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Monday, May 10, 2021

Writer's Analysis: Stephen King's Dark Tower - 008 Brainstorm Podcast

In Episode 8, we do an anaylsis of Stephen King's Drawing of the Three, Book 2 of the Dark Tower series.

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Epic and Fantasy, but not Epic Fantasy, King's series is an intriguing divergence from many others. I very much enjoyed this unconventional fantasy novel, and the audio book version was superb.

A question for the writer's and super readers: King leaves many questions unanswered. How does he get away with it? I have my thoughts, but I want to hear yours.

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Monday, May 3, 2021

Of Lords and Ladies. Peerage Titles for Fantasy Writers - 007 Brainstorm Podcast

In Episode 7, join me as I ponder how to choose a system of peerage for the world of Kip the Quick. While you can take example from the real world, maybe you don't want a Duke, Baron, Count, Viscount, and so on. Maybe you want it a little more simple...like Game of Thrones. 


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That's right. Ole Georgie kept it simple in Westeros: outside of the "Warden" title and that of the King, he spent his time on complexity on pretty much everything else.

As an aside: You'll once again hear me reference Kip's Return, and how great the progress was going at 99k words. Well that was 2016, and while it is finally done and in the hands of my copyeditor, the book ended up a LOT bigger.

So, what peerage system did you pick for your fantasy story and why?

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Monday, April 26, 2021

JK Rowling Tricks and Writing POV explained - 006 Brainstorm Podcast

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In Episode 6, it's time to dive into a Writer's Analysis of the different types of Point of View, called POV, and how I use 2 different types in Kip's Return, the sequel to Kip the Quick, when most books only use one.

I also disect a literary tool that JK Rowling uses fabulously well in the Harry Potter books, it keeps her books "relatively" lean, keeps the story moving and is something I really want to incorporate more for my own books. I don't know what you would call it in writing, perhaps "Tell" not "Show", but there's more to it than just using the "Tell Technique", and for that reason we'll simply call it the Hollywood Montage. (Until someone tells me I'm stupid.)

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Tuesday, April 20, 2021

Game of Thrones Review: Nudity, Gay Renly, and the Hound is a Pretty Boy - #005 Brainstorm Podcast

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In Episode 5, I'm returning to review more of the HBO series Game of Thrones, listen to the first part in Episode 4.

It's been years since I read the Song of Ice and Fire series, and a couple years at least since I read A Dance with Dragons. Intriguing to see the differences between book and TV series, that or I remember the books differently. While this might have been a bad thing with some book adaptations, the characters, the story, the acting is all so well done that instead it is just a fascinating comparison of what they chose to do differently.

The show absolutely rips through book 1, there's more nudity and sex in the show than I would have anticipated, and Renly is gay? Either I really missed this in the books, or Martin was very, very subtle with his hints. And the Hound is a pretty boy?

Quick Note: When I watched the series it was 2016 and there was a special on Hulu to add HBO for $5/mo. I think the price is now something like $15.
 
Sorry, more Roadnoise on this episode, and for the near future. Eventually I'll get to recording new content, and I'll do that (or at least try to do so) from home.

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Monday, April 12, 2021

Game of Thrones, I Started Watching...Finally - #004 Brainstorm Podcast

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In Episode 4 I talk about FINALLY starting to watching the Game of Thrones. After being a fan of the books for years, anxiously checking Martin's blog on a weekly basis for months and then years looking for that fateful update on the next book, I was pleased to seethat the HBO series is not just well done, but off to an excellent start.

Also, some brief fun talking about another sci-fi, fantasy, genre fiction podcast called Functional Nerds, run by Patrick Hester and John Anealio...or at least it was. I've been a bit out of touch of late and it looks like John Anealio had to step away. I'll miss you John. Hope you're well.

Fun mentioned links:
- George R.R. Martin is not your bitch: https://johnanealio.bandcamp.com/track/george-r-r-martin-is-not-your-bitch Song inspired by Neil Gaiman's infamous quote.
- Functional Nerds podcast: www.functionalnerds.com

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Monday, April 5, 2021

Thor Ragnarok Geek Out! Best of Movie Moments - #003 Brainstorm Podcast

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In Episode 3, it's time to geek out over Thor Ragnarok. Yes, I know, not new, but I watched it again recently, and this podcast was originally recorded in 2018. You know you love the movie, relive the fun and adventure with me.

MAJOR SPOILERS!!! But hey, we're well past the statue of limitations here.

If Thor is the God of Thunder, is Hella the Goddess of Blades?

Has anyone noticed that I called this the "Clifton Journal" at first? Just winging it, shooting from the hip, what can I say.

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Monday, March 29, 2021

Novel Writing Advice. Start Short - #002 Brainstorm Podcast

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Every author I've met starts their journey to learn the craft of writing with a story. These stories are their "Golden Ideas", often these ideas are too large, too ambitious and take too long. Learn the craft of writing faster, by writing short. Short stories let you experience the trial and error of creating a full story/character arc much faster. And doing so helps you learn the full writing process and valuable life lessons (I would dare say) much faster than sticking with writing a full length novel as your first piece of work.

It is a lesson I learned the hard way.

Short stories mentioned that are enjoyable reads and good examples of what can be achieved in the short form:
Erik Wecks' Eighty-Three is an inventive story of time travel. Time travel in a way that I haven't seen before. Available in the Anthology: The Time Travel Chronicles, with multiple other authors. https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B016XIY2EC

Touchstone by Sonia Orin Lyris. I read it for free on the Baen Books website, but they must have changed the formatting at some point because now it looks atrocious. Story is awesome, so just change the size of your browser (if on a desktop, phone is probably fine.) https://www.baen.com/touchstone. You can also buy the story here for your device: https://lyris.org/book/touchstone/

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Monday, March 22, 2021

Brainstorm Podcast #001 - Fantasy Adventure Kip the Quick, Book 2

The Brainstorm Podcast with fantasy author Clifton Hill is about writing, genre fiction and moral quandries.

Episode 1 talks about writing progress on the sequel to Kip the Quick, Kip's Return with a discussion of some of the challenges along the way.


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Monday, March 15, 2021

The Brainstorm Podcast

Hello dear reader, I have a new project that is really an old project, but it is finally, slowly coming your way.

Welcome to the soft launch of the Brainstorm Podcast!

I've been a podcast listener since before it was cool, and have had a desire to put out a podcast for some time now. I even recorded maybe 15 to 20 episodes back in 2018, but never took the time to put them together and launch. Well, that time is now.

But what will it be about?

No big surprise there: writing, genre fiction and moral quandries. Let me explain...

  • Genre fiction - reviews/analysis; books, but also movies and TV
    • I've been a book reviewer for multiple notable sites, including some that are now long dead, and slightly buried. I've reviewed for SF Signal, Grasping for the Wind, SFF World, and I will bring some of my reviews to the podcast.
    • I like to analyze what I like in a book, what I don't, and why, and I intend to go deep.
  • Writing tips
    • I'll break down my writing methods; what works and doesn't; habits, the whole lot. At times I've disagreed with the Writing Excuses team (awesome as they are), and there may be some episodes where I analyze their episode and give my own thoughts on the matter.
    • Sometimes we'll go into marketing and the business side of things.
  • Moral quandries
    • Fiction is great for looking at life from a different perspective, stepping outside the normal framework of our preconceptions and being able to think with fresh, unbiased eyes. I don't want to just talk about books and media, I want to go deeper. Let's analyze the connections and wisdom we can find within fiction to real life.
    • Sci-fi and fantasy stories are often of the What-If? And can serve as cautionary tales and opportunities to explore what might otherwise remain the unknown.

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Wednesday, March 10, 2021

Short Story: The Rocksmith

Lannith walked into the stone carver’s shop, carrying a black rock, a question on his mind.

“I’ll be right with you,” called a gruff voice, and Lannith stopped to stand in the entry, gazing around the dark shop, glass lamps lighting some of the carvings displayed on dark wooden shelves, the clink of metal on stone punctuating the otherwise silence.

Even outside it was a quiet day, growing more so as the mood had begun to weigh heavier on Tannith, just like the rock in his pocket.

He touched the rock, feeling the strange warmth, wondering again at the recent acquisition. His aunt had been a strange one at times, but he had certainly never expected to be given a rock from her as she passed, her eyes grown gray like her skin.

Her final words to him had been strained, and her grasping hand had told him that she had much more to say, but all that she managed was: “Keep it safe.”

The rocksmith, as the fellow liked to be called, was one of a kind. Most sculptors used a variety of media for their craft: whether stone, wood, or even metal, but Master Cragon specialized only in rock.

For that reason some called him a master of his craft, but others just called him crazy.

Lannith fidgeted, wondering if he should really have come. Cragon wouldn’t have any answer for Lannith, why, in fact, did it really matter?

He turned to go, but then the rocksmith came from the back, each step of his great frame a heavy thump on the floorboards. “What need you, young master?”

Lannith looked up, knowing that he had heard Cragon to be a large fellow, but what he had heard was almost deceptive in reality, and while Cragon hunched over coming through the doorway, it seemed to make him no less tall, and no less imposing for all of his bulk: his large face, lined and weathered; his mountainous shoulders; and great hands that looked like they could take Lannith’s face in one giant mitt and crush it like an egg.

“I was just curious, sir, to see your carvings. But, I...I really should go. It is just an idle interest. I don’t know what drew me. I will return at a later date.”

Then Lannith turned to the door.

But Cragon held him with his voice. “You came for a reason. You’re here. Hm. Out with it. I don’t take kind to falsehood.”

Lannith’s hand touched the rock in his pocket, feeling its warmth: was it warmer now? He took in a great breath. He was here after all, so why not? He touched the rock again. It was definitely warmer. He should have just tossed it away, be done with the strange mystery, but now he felt trapped by Cragon’s attention.

A piece of sandstone was crafted into an angel standing on a pedestal upon the counter before him, it was delicate and beautiful, a surprising contrast to Cragon’s harsh features.

“Ok, well, can you tell me, how do you make a simple piece of sandstone into this finely crafted angel?”

“Hm? What? No!” answered Cragon, his big face expressive. “No. I don’t ‘make’ the rock anything. I just reveal what it is.

“Eh, hm. You don’t understand. Here.” The rocksmith grabbed a hunk of stone, colored a deep red and sooty. “Here, see this? This is blood granite. Stupid name, not granite. There’s no mica in it. But I didn’t name it. You’d probably just call it a rock. See here? Look, look, yeah? No. It’s not granite. Not a piece of rock. No. It’s a delicate dove, yeah...hm. Neck tilted a little to the side. Left foot raised up. Right foot a little crooked—old break, old wound, healed long ago. Still favors it. Hm. That’s what this is: a dove, not a rock. A dove! Got it? Beautiful dove. Hm.”

Lannith nodded slowly with regret. Cragon was as eccentric as he had heard. He should have known better.

“Now. Put that down. See this? Hm? See it? Limestone. What do you see? You see a rock? Right? Yeah, I know. I can see it in your face. No—not a rock. It’s a...it’s a lizard. Tiny little lizard. Scaly hide. Tail torn off two months back. Regrown. Smooth—smoother than the rest.”

Cragon set the stone down, rubbing his fingers together. “But you didn’t come to see what I have, you have another question. I see it in your eyes! Out with it. Hm. Don’t have all day.”

Lannith grasped the rock in his pocket, nearly warm enough to be called hot. His friends would call him foolish. But they didn’t need to know, and something of Cragon’s insistence was motivating. Lannith pulled the stone out, the color as black as pitch, but at an angle, or in light, you could see its smooth reflective glassiness.

“I was wondering if you could tell me about this stone?”

Cragon took the stone in his great hand, running calloused fingers over it with gentle dexterity. “Hm. This. This! Right here. You think this is, uh... Onyx? Black shiny rock?”

Lannith nodded.

“No. Yeah? You think this is a rock. You think that is all it is. No. Not that. It’s a...let me see. It’s a...a...hmm.”

Cragon went still, very still as he stared. “Oh...my...”

Lannith swallowed, feeling suddenly colder; the lamps dimmer.

“What is it?”

But Cragon didn’t reply, his small eyes widening under his heavy brow. “No—no—no.”

Lannith licked his lips.

Shaking his head Cragon shouted, “Go. Go! You’re in danger! Hm. Don’t you get it? Don’t you see? ‘Course not, you’re blind. No. Blind! They’re always blind.”

None of this made sense, but Cragon’s intensity built up a fear within Lannith like he had rarely felt.

And then light manifested within the rock, glowing brighter and brighter, the lamps dimming to near blackness, the remaining light of day from the gap of the open door dwindled, and the rocksmith dropped the rock to the ground, hissing, smoke rising from an angry red mark burned in his flesh.

The stone hit the ground, a fissure of cracks lit through its surface, every crack glowing like it was lit from within by the sun. The cracks splintered and the stone was transformed into a many pointed shape of such perfect symmetry that it could not have been fashioned by man.

Cragon leapt over the counter like an acrobat, landing smoothly, pulling some metal box fashioned of strange design, carved with markings that Lannith had never seen. He set it next to the glowing rock, the hinged lid open. The air in the room began to blow by Lannith’s ears, rushing into the rock; the very space rippled with electricity; the wooden floor beneath began to blacken and smoke.

“What’s going on?!”

Cragon grabbed a set of iron tongs, grasping the rock in them, trying to move it into the box, but as soon as the metal touched, it glowed red, then yellow and melted away. A fact that defied reason for the stone had not yet burned away the floor beneath.

“Go!” howled the rocksmith, but Lannith was riveted to the spot.

Scowling, Cragon grabbed at the stone, trying to transfer it to the box, but before he could even touch it, the fingers on his hand blistered, catching to flame and burning wildly.

Screaming, Cragon fell back, the thud as he fell to the floor barely felt amidst the roar of wind.

Lannith’s eyes were seared by the brightness of the stone, white-hot. And he was transported back to his aunt’s death bed, straining to hear her last words, wondering at her sudden interest. This prideful woman that had never needed anyone; always strong, always independent, but the need in her that day had shocked Lannith, making him wonder if he had ever truly known this woman.

And he remembered watching her wrinkled lips as they moved for seconds after she had uttered her last words, and he realized she had not been moving them for pain, or for loss of faculties, but for an attempt to speak further, though she was never able to draw that breath. He could picture her lips form the letters, then the syllables, then the words and he realized that after she had told him to keep it safe, she had also said: “Only you can touch the stone. Only you can nullify its power.”

He knew it with a shocking certainty.

Lannith would have called her last words madness, but for the scene before him. Compelled, moving without cognitive thought he reached down and grabbed the stone, feeling the heat like a physical punch, but his fingers did not burn. Strange thoughts grabbed at him, attacking his mind, telling him it was wrong, telling him to leave the stone, to go away.

But he had brought this stone here, given it to the rocksmith who now huddled on the ground like a child, cradling his blackened fingers to his chest. And picking the stone up, the heat redoubling, bringing tears to his eyes he shoved it into the chest and slammed the lid shut with a thunderous bang.

Upon closure, the box clicked, some locking mechanism activating, and the markings upon the surface lit up with a blue light that ran across the box like lightning.

And then all the wind, the heat, and the searing light of the stone vanished.

Silence pervaded as Lannith looked at his hand, whole and unmarked, except for 8 points now branded into his palm.

Cragon moaned, sitting up, his wide face covered in sweat, glancing at the box, then breathing heavily as he pointed with a statement and accusation all rolled into one. “You are a Nullifier.”

Lannith shook his head. “That’s not possible.”

“Hm. If that’s what you think, then danger has only just begun.” He looked at the box again, the blue light fading to a dull glow that pulsed, the lid so tightly fitted to the box that if the stone still glowed from within, there was no evidence. “Hm. And we have little time.” 

Copyright © 2021 by Clifton Hill


What did you think? Intrigued? I don't have a larger story for this scene, it's something that popped into my mind years ago, some smith-type character that could see deeper into his art than one would expect, so much so that it might be considered a talent. You've perhaps heard the analogy that a sculptor does not craft the shape from the stone (or wood), so much as they liberate what was already hiding within.

And what happens if this rocksmith didn't just see a piece of art hidden within, what happens if he saw something dreadful?